tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5137039081218727964.post6104533365279561046..comments2024-03-19T13:02:39.405+05:30Comments on पढ़ते-पढ़ते: पीट हाइन की कविताएँमनोज पटेलhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18240856473748797655noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5137039081218727964.post-52512015419255923542012-04-21T11:28:42.832+05:302012-04-21T11:28:42.832+05:30Dhanyawaad Manoj!
Tum ne wah lamha pakad liya
jo ...Dhanyawaad Manoj!<br /><br />Tum ne wah lamha pakad liya<br />jo pahli kavita jaisa hi <br />Ashesh ke saath hokar guzra. <br /><br />Khule aasmaaono ke neeche<br />thikaane banaane waalon ke saath<br />aise 'haadse'bahut khoobsoorti se <br />saajha ho jaate hain.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5137039081218727964.post-61330887705887102502012-04-21T11:19:47.748+05:302012-04-21T11:19:47.748+05:30Dhanyawaad, Manoj.
Tumne peter aur Ashesh ke saat...Dhanyawaad, Manoj.<br /><br />Tumne peter aur Ashesh ke saath<br />beete ek jaise 'mazaak' ko<br />tatkaal pakad liya.<br /><br />Ham jitne khule aasmaan ke neeche rahte hain<br />utne hi haadse aur karishmen<br />hamaare saajha ho jaate hain.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5137039081218727964.post-1577428947347050522012-03-21T15:57:15.176+05:302012-03-21T15:57:15.176+05:30itni khoobsurti se kase hain tanj ki chot bhi na l...itni khoobsurti se kase hain tanj ki chot bhi na lage aur dard bhi ubhar aaye!!Gr8 writing.<br />is blog par niymit vichran karna zaruri sa ho gaya hai.Sunitamohanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10616319094256028882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5137039081218727964.post-33072670854609780342012-03-20T14:10:02.066+05:302012-03-20T14:10:02.066+05:30Gruks - simple,logical and enjoyable.Gruks - simple,logical and enjoyable.Aparna Bhagwat.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17726821305674440703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5137039081218727964.post-78752699566883311052012-03-20T10:35:51.831+05:302012-03-20T10:35:51.831+05:30बहुत कसी हुई व्यंग कवितायें और वैसा ही अनुवाद !बहु...बहुत कसी हुई व्यंग कवितायें और वैसा ही अनुवाद !बहुत बधाई मनोज जी !अरुण अवधhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15693359284485982502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5137039081218727964.post-8155204202171837022012-03-20T09:49:18.702+05:302012-03-20T09:49:18.702+05:30वाह..........
कमाल की रचनाएँ....
हर बार गलती...मगर...वाह..........<br />कमाल की रचनाएँ....<br />हर बार गलती...मगर पहले से कम...यही है अक्लमंदी..<br />बहुत बढ़िया...ANULATA RAJ NAIRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02386833556494189702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5137039081218727964.post-49115714902245336622012-03-20T09:46:53.020+05:302012-03-20T09:46:53.020+05:30I know now that padhte padhte will have surprises...I know now that padhte padhte will have surprises each day to unravel!<br /><br />Beautiful translation!अनुपमा पाठकhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09963916203008376590noreply@blogger.com